This is one of those kindle part books. This was part 1,offered free. From a marketing stand point this makes sense, and it's not something I have a problem with.
I find the idea behind this to be rather interesting. The writing is good in terms of style, and it has been proofread and edited.
I just found the main characters, in particular the hero, to be rather unlikable. Okay, unlikable mostly applies to the heroine. The heroine has some positives - she isn't skinny - but she is also rather uninteresting.