Flaw ruins it

Lord of Misrule: Ritual (Volume 1) - JS Hope

So this is one of those Amazon Kindle books that you buy in installments, so if you are thinking of getting it,  you have been forewarned. (this part is a freebie, the rest are .99).  It also ends with a cliffhanger.  

 

It is actually pretty well written and the erotic parts were more erotic than 50 Shades of Grey.  And better than many romance novels.  It was actually kinda good.  The problem is that the heroine's backstory makes little sense and because of this she comes across as a spoiled brat.  If she had been aged a few years, this wouldn't have been a problem.