Maybe it is because I haven't read the blog or lived in Delhi, but I found this lacking in some places. Perhaps, it was I found it funny that Soofi gets upset when one woman doesn't tell him everything, but he doesn't tell the reader everything either.
It's strange. The writing, in terms of straight style, is good, but I found something off about the tone.
It's strange. The writing, in terms of straight style, is good, but I found something off about the tone.
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