William Shakespeare's The Clone Army Attacketh: Star Wars Part the Second - Ian Doescher

In this and Doescher's treatment of the Phantom Menace, you need to pay attention to Mace's dialogue because it contains a hidden detail.


And no, it isn't cursed words being spelled out or anything like that.


But, yeah this is weak.  It isn't Doescher's fault. It's the movie's.  And I still don't buy (1) the romance between Padme and Ani and (2) Padme's total dismissal of Ani's killing an entire tribe.