I picked this up when it was offered free. In terms of grammar, it’s fine. It edited pretty well, the hot scenes are hot. I just couldn’t get into for some reason. Maybe because I can’t buy the heroine’s back-story or maybe it was the harassment in one case paid for laughs (the reader’s laughs, not the heroines. It’s not rape, and it is explained as a cultural thing. I know, I know, it sounds weird, but in the story it does make sense). For some reason, it isn’t clicking with me.