SPOILER ALERT!
Could be worse

I have to say that this short story isn't the type of book that I usually read. I have to also admit that I picked this up because it was free. It is not something that I would pay money for (simply because it is not my thing).
That said, while I didn't find it erotic, it was pretty clear of typos and other faults that seem to make their way into SPA work. Bell knows what editing is. I also have to give Bell credit and props for giving May a friend, and showing May actually working (even if I didn't quite buy her in the position).
In fact, I didn't find it bad enough to make fun of (outside of the whole dinosaur intercourse thing, I mean really tongue???).